Friday, June 13, 2014

Tips for Children's Writers: Growing Up "Google"

One of the hard things about writing for children, and especially writing middle grade, is capturing the perspective and world view of the characters in the age group. I'm always reminded of this with a jolt when my own kids have no idea what a cassette is or see an old rotary phone in an older movie and say "What's that?"

Some kids I know cringe at the thought of actually talking to someone on the phone -- it's easier to text and/or message someone online.

This kind of mindset is very different from what many writers grew up with, but I think it's important to think about it if you want to understand where your readers are coming from. 

I liked this post by Terry Heick at Te@chThought on June 12, 2014:

40 Things That Have Credibility With Google Natives

It really makes you think about what it's like to be a kid in today's world. Some examples: 

2. Believing that they know technology better than adults (it’s like a secret language)

8.  Brief bursts of communication (as opposed to extended dialogue)

14. Free everything (music, games, downloads, apps, etc.)


What do you notice about the perspective of your readers? Any tips to share?



Monday, June 9, 2014

Marvelous Middle Grade Monday: One Came Home

I listened to the audiobook version of One Came Home during some long car rides, and it was a perfect choice. Listening gave me a chance to really appreciate the distinctive voice for the narrator that the author created using specific words and phrases (notice I don’t mean the sound of the voice of the woman who read the story).  

Today’s Pick:  One Came Home

by Amy Timberlake

Knopf Books for Young Readers, 2013

From Random House:

In the town of Placid, Wisconsin, in 1871, Georgie Burkhardt is known for two things: her uncanny aim with a rifle and her habit of speaking her mind plainly.

But when Georgie blurts out something she shouldn't, her older sister Agatha flees, running off with a pack of "pigeoners" trailing the passenger pigeon migration. And when the sheriff returns to town with an unidentifiable body—wearing Agatha's blue-green ball gown—everyone assumes the worst. Except Georgie. Refusing to believe the facts that are laid down (and coffined) before her, Georgie sets out on a journey to find her sister. She will track every last clue and shred of evidence to bring Agatha home. 

Yet even with resolute determination and her trusty Springfield single-shot, Georgie is not prepared for what she faces on the western frontier.

My Take:

I liked the mystery of Georgie trying to find out what happened to her sister, and that’s what kept me listening. It took me a little while to get into the story, since the main character and narrator Georgie seemed to get sidetracked with reminiscing. I think upper middle graders will easily relate to some of the themes in the story, like Georgie feeling responsible for her sister’s death, having a crush on a boy, and stubbornly trying to solve problems without help. It was also fun to read a “wild west” novel and learn a bit about life in the 1870’s.

If you are interested in learning more about creating a character with a strong voice, this is a good novel to read. I loved Geogie’s style and her vocabulary!

Opening Line:

“So it comes to this, I remember thinking on Wednesday June 7, 1871.”

Other Info:

Amy Timberlake lives in Chicago with her husband. Besides writing, she loves cooking and taking photos.

One Came Home is a Newbery Honor Book, an ALA-ALSC Notable Children's Book and a Winner of the Edgar Allan Poe Award for Best Juvenile Novel.

Other books by this author:

That Girl Lucy Moon
The Dirty Cowboy (picture book)

For more, visit Amy Timberlake’s website.


Looking for more Marvelous Middle Grade Monday books? Visit Shannon Messenger’s blog for a list of bloggers reviewing great books today! Shannon is the founder of Marvelous Middle Grade Monday and the author of the middle grade novels, Keeper of the Lost Cities and Exile (Keeper of the Lost Cities #2).

Friday, June 6, 2014

IODE Violet Downey Book Award Winner: An Infidel in Paradise

I'm excited to share the news that my fellow MiG Writer, Susan Laidlaw, has won an award for her first novel, AN INFIDEL IN PARADISE.

AN INFIDEL IN PARADISE won the National Chapter of Canada IODE Violet Downey Book Award. This award is given annually for "the best English language book containing at least 500 words of text (preferably with Canadian content) in any category..."

You can get some insights into why Susan wrote the book, hear her thoughts on winning the award, and listen to her read a little of the story on the IODE website.

For more information about Susan Laidlaw, her other books and her interesting international adventures, visit her website at http://www.sjlaidlaw.com/ or follow her on twitter @SusanLaidlaw1.

Thursday, May 29, 2014

Silver Birch Award Winner: Record Breaker

This year, I read all of the nominees for the Silver Birch fiction award. They are all middle grade novels. Kids vote on their favourite and there's a big celebration in May. Here's a list of the nominees for this year:

 Ultra by David Carroll

Record Breaker by Robin Stevenson

Eldritch Manor by Kim Thompson

The Metro Dogs of Moscow by Rachelle Delaney

Nobody's Dog by Ria Voros

Neil Flambe and the Tokyo Treasure by Kevin Sylvester

Curse of the Dream Witch by Allan Stratton

The Hypnotists by Gordon Korman

Yesterday's Dead by Pat Bourke

The Awesome, Almost 100% True Adventures of Matt & Craz by Alan Silberberg

My top two favourites were:






 And by popular vote, here's the winner:

The 2014 Silver Birch Fiction Award® Winner
Record Breaker
Robin Stevenson




Wow! How exciting! I really enjoyed this one too. It was short and a touching and emotional story. If you'd like to read my thoughts on this book, check out my Marvelous Middle Grade Monday post on Record Breaker.

Monday, May 26, 2014

Marvelous Middle Grade Monday: Half a Chance

I loved all the insights into photography in this book! It made me want to get outside with my camera.
 
Today’s Pick: Half a Chance


by Cynthia Lord

Scholastic, 2014

From Random House:

When Lucy's family moves to an old house on a lake, Lucy tries to see her new home through her camera's lens, as her father has taught her -- he's a famous photographer, away on a shoot. Will her photos ever meet his high standards? When she discovers that he's judging a photo contest, Lucy decides to enter anonymously. She wants to find out if her eye for photography is really special -- or only good enough.

As she seeks out subjects for her photos, Lucy gets to know Nate, the boy next door. But slowly the camera reveals what Nate doesn't want to see: his grandmother's memory is slipping away, and with it much of what he cherishes about his summers on the lake. This summer, Nate will learn about the power of art to show truth. And Lucy will learn how beauty can change lives . . . including her own.

My Take:

This is a quieter story but if you like books about family, nature and friendship, you will enjoy this book. There are many elements in the story to relate to: wanting to win a contest, worrying about whether a new friend really wants to be your friend, and confusion over just what is happening to an elderly person you care about. Lucy’s parents were clearly part of her life and a source of support and conflict.

As a writer, I thought this was a great example of a middle grade novel. The voice was most definitely middle grade, as was the perspective of first person narrator. I loved all the details from nature in this book, especially the loons. It made me think about the words I use to describe interactions with nature.

Opening Line:

“Lucy, we’re going to love this place!” Dad called to me from the porch of the faded, red-shingled cottage with white trim.

Quotes:

“When I’m thinking about how to frame a shot and when to click, there’s nothing else. It fills me up in a good way.”

“Putting the camera down, I took a deep, cold breath, pulling it all inside me—the trees, the mountains, the sky—and held it in for as long as I could.”

“But now that I was wading into the lake, cringing at the gooey bottom and imagining what else might be in the dark water under the dock, it felt cold and gross.”

Other Info:

Cynthia Lord has been writing ever since she was a child. She has her own writing “shed”, as well as two bunnies, a guinea pig and a dog.

One of her previous books, Rules, was named a Newbery Honor book.

Other books by this author:

Rules
Touch Blue
The Hod Rod Hamster series
Shelter Pet Squad Series


For more, visit Cynthia Lord’s website.

Looking for more Marvelous Middle Grade Monday books? Visit Shannon Messenger’s blog for a list of bloggers reviewing great books today! Shannon is the founder of Marvelous Middle Grade Monday and the author of the middle grade novels, Keeper of the Lost Cities and Exile (Keeper of the Lost Cities #2).



Thursday, May 22, 2014

Pacing in Picture Books: Insights from a Twitter Chat with Jodell Sadler

Did you catch the recent Twitter chat with agent Jodell Sadler on picture book pacing? [#PBPacing] Thanks to KidLit411 and Jodell, I got a chance to think more about pacing and found some great resources where I can learn even more. Here are some of the insights from Jodell's chat:

“PB Pacing is about the interplay of art and words, the slowing and speeding of the text to enhance story emotionally.

“It is about paying attention to what I call "The XPs of Picture Books: prosody, poetry, play, plot and performance.

“Pacing enhances the story arc, increase tension. Many tools serve as pacing markers, i.e., the repetitive line.”


Jodell suggested creating a two column table in Word with 16-18 rows to help check the pacing and page turns. Her comments made me think a lot about how the page turns move the story along and create tension: 

“Page turns are integral. They offer surprise, new scenes, and interactivity to your book--a performance.”

“It's about exploring the negative space of writing: how much can we pull back and lure our reader in.”

“Most important part of page turns is the play... make those leaps and jumps in MS to surprise readers.


I was also very interested in Jodell's responses to questions about keeping down word counts, since agents and editors often ask for manuscripts of 500 words or less. It's so challenging sometimes! She referred back to the 20 tools she has studied and discussed in length on her website, Pacing Picture Books. Jodell's website is a preview of her upcoming book on pacing (I can hardly wait!)  

“Pacing helps writers make sound decisions in dropping word count.”

“When you explore tools and see how they layer and enhance story, less words are needed, the pace quickens.”



This was probably my favourite quote of the chat: 

“The magic of picture book pacing starts with the writer. When you pour all your passion onto the page.”


This chat was so inspiring! I’m revising one of my picture books today, based on some of this great advice.  For further information you can check out Jodell Sadler’s work on pacing at:
www.pacingpicturebooks.com or follow her on twitter @PacingStory2WOW

For some examples of well-paced stories: www.awesomereading.com
If you also write middle grade like I do, you'll find examples that discuss middle grade and YA books.

There is also an interesting agent spotlight with Jodell Sadler on KidLit411.

Monday, May 19, 2014

Victoria Day Reading

Today is a holiday up here in Canada -- Victoria Day! I don't have a Marvelous Middle Grade Monday post, but maybe having a day off will give me a chance to catch up on some reading. You can find a list of reviews of some great middle grade reads over at Shannon Messenger's site.

 Along with reading, I plan to enjoy some outdoor time, now that the weather is finally nice enough!

 Wishing you a wonderful day, whether you're writing, working or just hanging out!